Great Borders I learned a lot of something in reading one passage.There are two borders pyhsical and political border.Pyhsical border between countries can be rivers ,oceans or mountaıns.For example, The Rio Grande River is a physşcal border between Mexico and the United states.Political borders are line between countries . For example , Europen caountris had power over many parts of Africa. Second reading passage said history of borders.I was excited , because I learned about events in the world.For example, some countries had walls or fences on their borders.walls had several purposes.They want to safe from enemis.Therefore,they helped to prevent invasions walls .Because of somewalls were famous.Famous walls;China,Hadrian's wall and Berlin wall.China wall, guards were men who could see anyone who came near the wall.People had to pay the Romans to came through Hadrian's Wall.Berlin Wall to prevent the people of east Berlin from leaving. Walls stop enemies from entering the country.Walls help the goverment ceollect money from people when they enter the country.
Dear Melike, Your comment is really nice and I especially appreciate it as you wrote your own ideas. You explained the walls and their types very nicely. On the other handi you can mention the function of the walls from past to present to make it more detailed. Besides, please be careful about using connected sentences. I think you jump from one topic to another especially in the last paragraph. Cohesion is important in writing. Other than that thank you for your nice writing. Well-done:)
Name of Life First reading tell; first name and given name common in the world.Second name doesn't usually common .People who pays attention to the naqmes.They want to get special.Some cultures , parents may pay money to professiınal to help them find good name.Another common choice is to name the child after afamous religious and famous person.For example ; Barrack Obama and Madonna. Second passage tell;Names imply a lot of something in our life.Name's have mean and reason.Passage one tells:Why do people change names?There are three reasons for this , marrige , get famous , or a new country .Many women changes their family name to their husband's family name when they get married .Some famous people think their name is too ordinary.Therefore they want to change name was Dana Owens.Immıgrantssometimes change their names because their name my be difficult to pronounce. I learned new somethings in passage three.Some companies especially car companies have people name and initials name.İnitials name such as BMW and people name is Toyota.They know that company and product names are very important .I didn't know.The name shouldn't be too ordinary .For example; The Shoe Company .İt is boring name.A good name should be easy spell.Choosing and changing name is an important part of any business .Names can have a powerful influence on customers.
Dear Melike, first of all, I have to say that your comments are in the wrong place. You should copy the two comments above to the posts of the appropriate weeks. this is just a welcome post. Secondly, thank you for reflecting on the reading texts, and I can say that your reflection is good and summarizing. I appreciate that you mention every part of the text. However, please careful about the grammar mistakes as they may hinder the meaning. well-done:)
Great Borders
YanıtlaSilI learned a lot of something in reading one passage.There are two borders pyhsical and political border.Pyhsical border between countries can be rivers ,oceans or mountaıns.For example, The Rio Grande River is a physşcal border between Mexico and the United states.Political borders are line between countries . For example , Europen caountris had power over many parts of Africa.
Second reading passage said history of borders.I was excited , because I learned about events in the world.For example, some countries had walls or fences on their borders.walls had several purposes.They want to safe from enemis.Therefore,they helped to prevent invasions walls .Because of somewalls were famous.Famous walls;China,Hadrian's wall and Berlin wall.China wall, guards were men who could see anyone who came near the wall.People had to pay the Romans to came through Hadrian's Wall.Berlin Wall to prevent the people of east Berlin from leaving.
Walls stop enemies from entering the country.Walls help the goverment ceollect money from people when they enter the country.
Dear Melike,
YanıtlaSilYour comment is really nice and I especially appreciate it as you wrote your own ideas. You explained the walls and their types very nicely. On the other handi you can mention the function of the walls from past to present to make it more detailed. Besides, please be careful about using connected sentences. I think you jump from one topic to another especially in the last paragraph. Cohesion is important in writing.
Other than that thank you for your nice writing.
Well-done:)
Name of Life
YanıtlaSilFirst reading tell; first name and given name common in the world.Second name doesn't usually common .People who pays attention to the naqmes.They want to get special.Some cultures , parents may pay money to professiınal to help them find good name.Another common choice is to name the child after afamous religious and famous person.For example ; Barrack Obama and Madonna.
Second passage tell;Names imply a lot of something in our life.Name's have mean and reason.Passage one tells:Why do people change names?There are three reasons for this , marrige , get famous , or a new country .Many women changes their family name to their husband's family name when they get married .Some famous people think their name is too ordinary.Therefore they want to change name was Dana Owens.Immıgrantssometimes change their names because their name my be difficult to pronounce.
I learned new somethings in passage three.Some companies especially car companies have people name and initials name.İnitials name such as BMW and people name is Toyota.They know that company and product names are very important .I didn't know.The name shouldn't be too ordinary .For example; The Shoe Company .İt is boring name.A good name should be easy spell.Choosing and changing name is an important part of any business .Names can have a powerful influence on customers.
Dear Melike,
YanıtlaSilfirst of all, I have to say that your comments are in the wrong place. You should copy the two comments above to the posts of the appropriate weeks. this is just a welcome post.
Secondly, thank you for reflecting on the reading texts, and I can say that your reflection is good and summarizing. I appreciate that you mention every part of the text. However, please careful about the grammar mistakes as they may hinder the meaning.
well-done:)